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Wednesday 17 October 2018

new church

last week  our new church has opened i writin a story about it

                                                         plz enjoy readsing it :)


                           
The new Church When i went in the church i was so excited that time When i saw the BIGGEST! Bowl i ever seen i dipt My hand in inside was holy water they fild lot’s And lot’s of holy water the i saw the biggest room i’ve ever Seen, we sat down and there were lot’s of people in It Father palo, the priest, talked about new stuff I could not hear what there saying but i still listen This guy was doing a samoan dance and the other One was doing it as well but she had a sword, It was time for us to sing a song after they were proud off my singing so Miss Wilton gave me a neck lace full of candys and there was even a stachios of mary Came from francs and St Bernadett from francs as well At the end we went home. The church was rebiult because it got damage by the earth Qake for the past we been doing mass at the hole.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Stan, I liked your writing. I like how you used descriptive language. Maybe next time you could add a proper discretion. Did you go to the Church opening?

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  2. yes i did go to th grant church opening

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