plz enjoy readsing it :)
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Wednesday, 17 October 2018
new church
last week our new church has opened i writin a story about it
plz enjoy readsing it :)
The new Church
When i went in the church i was so excited that time
When i saw the BIGGEST! Bowl i ever seen i dipt
My hand in inside was holy water they fild lot’s
And lot’s of holy water the i saw the biggest room i’ve ever
Seen, we sat down and there were lot’s of people in
It Father palo, the priest, talked about new stuff
I could not hear what there saying but i still listen
This guy was doing a samoan dance and the other
One was doing it as well but she had a sword,
It was time for us to sing a song after they were proud off my singing so Miss Wilton gave me a neck lace full of candys and there was even a stachios of mary
Came from francs and St Bernadett from francs as well
At the end we went home.
The church was rebiult because it got damage by the earth
Qake for the past we been doing mass at the hole.
plz enjoy readsing it :)
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Hi Stan, I liked your writing. I like how you used descriptive language. Maybe next time you could add a proper discretion. Did you go to the Church opening?
ReplyDeleteyes i did go to th grant church opening
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