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Tuesday 11 September 2018

My Life on The Moon

i have been writing this story if you want more 
then comment and i will  reply and i will write more
if you want me to keep on going please comment see ya bye

My life on the moon.

There was a guy called Stan. He was on the moon. He has lots of food.
A hut too. one day he saw another hut. There was a sign called the dojo
Next morning he went inside the dojo he saw lots astronauts. He went up to Sign up. next day he got to the dojo and met Mark. he was a nice guy and smart.
Stan said why is there a dojo here up on the moon. Mark said there are evil aliens taking over the world and we have  to kill them.
he said. Stan said oh do they steal other people stuff.Mark said Yes. Mark said why. cause when i was sleeping they steal my alarm clock and my cake. Mark said oh.
Then they all saw the EVIL ALIENS! The the master said
Prepare for duty. Then they all went to fight the aliens.
Mark and Stan’s team  won but the super duper duper duper EVIL ALIEN!.  then they all look everywhere then Stan
Had an idea. He said the super duper luper
Evil alien are in the world then they all went back to earth.
Then they all fight then they saw THE SUPER DUPER
LUPER EVIL ALIEN . he was SUPER DUPER LUPER  ugly
Then  they all fight then Stan wake up then he said
It was just a dream then he heard a little voice. then he
Went to get his suit and went back to earth. Then he saw a the alien and the aliens name is thanos 2.0.  he was very strong that no one defeated him when he was fighting thanos 2.0 he got hurt then he fell and die. then he woke the he
Said hahahahahaha thanos i was faking dead. He said
Lukley i brought my team. Then they started fighting
they defeated him. Then they all took the weapons
And destroy it. Then they went to Stan’s house and turn
It in to a manson. then Stan said guys you might need
To see this we're SURROUNDED! By EVIL ALIENS!
then they all fight then more aliens apierd stan said
Quick inside. then he said we need are weapons
Then they went to the basement then they got there weapons. And went outside then
They said aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa then the aliens did the same thing then they thought thanos 2.0  was dead
But he was alive. Thanos 2.0  said you are my master. your Honor to be here. And make me as a worker.
Stan said ok then i've  written a all the choirs here
Do it if you don’t you die. Ok
Master. Stan said don’t call me master but master
Thanos 2.0 says. Stan says huh fine.
Yay. get on with your work stan says. Ok master.
And don’t forget to wash the bathroom.
OK! master. aw man. WHAT DID YOU SAY.
NOTHING MASTER. I HEARD YOU SAY AW.
OK MASTER I WON’T DO IT AGAIN.
Uh guys thanos 2.0s team wants him hurry
Get him. Stan said. Mark said hey your team has arrived
Oh i'll get it sorted everyone attack them ok aaaaaaaaa
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. Quick inside mark hurry
Master go fight and you Mark get out the poop
Machine gun that never ending ok. Ok mark said.
And you guys get set up and me i'll get set up as well.
Guys get ready ok guys. Lets go aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
Yes we defeat them. now thanos 2.0
Guys get ready for face 3 mu hahahahahahahahahaha.
Hey mark go get thanos 2.0. mark go get the weapons
Camilflog ok. Ok mark said. Hey thanos  come and get me.
Hey thanos ready to go down aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa stan said. And then we won
Yes finally we defeat him now bury. him quick bury him. Now we can live on earth and be rich huh that then we will be superheros ok lets go. Ok said stan. The people were like woohoo at stan. The they were at a stage people were looking at them president said these people save earth now they will be now awarded with a metal. Gold one go to stan he had been such a good leader so here is your gold metal. Silver to mark he had been such a good friend to stan and such good aim of the poop gun. Bronze go to ari he had done such go work. Now give them a paki paki. Now you will be rich and be a superhero. thanks said stan.

NOW TO SAVE EARTH FROM ALIENS to be continued


















 



2 comments:

  1. Hi stan i like your life on the moon story.Next time can you take out some of the ands and thens but the rest of the story is very good.

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